Huh. It's impossible to say "that would never work." I'm just thinking it's a tight space (one page) to pull it off. Maybe if it came off jarring, that's why you got that feedback?
I mean the POV of two characters. I wrote a query I thought was really almost there but then I got feedback that it had two POVs, but is that good or bad?
The only rule for queries is to keep 'em short (3-4 paragraphs, one page) and grab the agent or editor's attention through a compelling micro-synopsis of your story, including mechanical info like how long it is, and whether complete.
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I mean the POV of two characters. I wrote a query I thought was really almost there but then I got feedback that it had two POVs, but is that good or bad?
The only rule for queries is to keep 'em short (3-4 paragraphs, one page) and grab the agent or editor's attention through a compelling micro-synopsis of your story, including mechanical info like how long it is, and whether complete.