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"That sounds good to me. Thanks!" Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"Gets right to the story, something happening. I wonder if there's a way to make it…" Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"It's true and intriguing. The language is pretty, but I don't know if it's serving…" Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"It's her parents, would it be better to say that?" Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"The reaction was not what Elizabeth had been hoping for." Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"This sentence is confusing me. I think maybe it's too many words about explosion? …" Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"Agreed! It conjures a familiar feeling of being forgotten, ignored, not wanted that…" Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"The "this morning" at the end feels awkward to me. It seems to fight the present te…" Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"I agree, the "it" appears to refer back to the bicycle, which doesn't make sense. L…" Ruth Madison replied Aug 15, 2011 to Opening Lines	477	Nov 30, 2011 Reply by Samantha Carlin
"As far as I can tell, Smashwords only does ebooks, is that right? I currently have…" Ruth Madison replied Jun 28, 2011 to iUniverse: What do you think?	10	Aug 31, 2012 Reply by Juanita Davis-King

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