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Opening Lines
What is the first sentence of your work-in-progress? Post it here, and get feedback from your fellow She Writers about whether your opening line leaves them wanting more. And don't forget to take some time to read other writers' first words, too.
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Permalink Reply by GiGi Rena on -
The burden of loving someone is too much knowing one day you'll be the one sent to kill him.
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Permalink Reply by Liz Berg on -
Have you transposed the 'is'?
The burden of loving someone too much is knowing one day you'll be the one sent to kill him.
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Permalink Reply by GiGi Rena on
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Thanks Liz - that would be a yes. Reminder to me "re-read before posting" :-) It could also go like this.
But I'm actually loving your post. Thanks so much.
It’s a burden to love someone knowing one day you’ll be the one sent to kill him.
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Permalink Reply by Samantha CJ Hemmerich on
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GiGi: Much better. Makes me want to read the book.
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Permalink Reply by GiGi Rena on
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If that reply was for me Nicole thanks... sometimes it's hard to follow the replies. But I know I don't want something that's been used lately or at all. I will rethink the opening line :-)
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Permalink Reply by GiGi Rena on
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Now I'm going to look at cheese and remember this - my eyes even watered. Great job.
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Permalink Reply by Savvy Thorne on -
Ick! Very effective. My stomach is turning.
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Permalink Reply by Kristen Taber on -
nice! I can see the fumes wafting!
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Permalink Reply by Alexandra Wright on -
Love it!
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