I have a completed novel that has already gone through numerous revisions. I am looking for an overall critique and will do the same in return. I am open to exchanging a few chapters to make sure we are a good match. My novel, Veil of Walls, is about a young New Englander who finds herself trapped in Iran after the sudden death of her parents.

I like reading literary fiction, especially stories that take place in other cultures and other times.
I have published a few short stories and essays in local venues, a vegetarian cookbook, and self-published a spiritual memoir. You can check out samples of my writing on my website: www.patriciapanahi.com

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Hi Patricia,

Your project sounds interesting to me. I am in my second draft of my novella, so I would be able to send you only the beginning. My novella is about a confident single woman that gets involved in destructive relationship. She has to face an abortion and depression.

What do you think?

Cheers, Ana

P.S. I could not open your link.

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