Hi all - 

I've set aside a close-to-final draft for a few weeks, after which I'll print and take it on a trip with me to read through beginning to end for the first time. After that and any corrections, I plan to hire an editor.

Do any of you have insights regarding the process of the first read-through? I basically plan to just read with a marker in hand, but if you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them. Thanks!

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Thanks, Susan! The support here from people like you is tremendous. I just sent you a note, which had a word limit for the initial message/friend request so I couldn't respond fully, but yes -- insight on the second and third stages would help, as would more names (I have more questions on that, too. Just let me know when I've worn you out!).

Hey, Jessica!

I wish I knew something technical and all tried and proven to offer.  I use a fine point pen with lots of notes in the margin.  I guess it works.  Then, I get the editor's two cents worth.  While that process seems to work for me, who knows how effective it really is?  This sounds like a discussion thread where I need to just sit back and learn what works for others.

Thanks, Regina! I appreciate the input. That's what I'm planning on -- me, the manu, and a pen. Then I'll read it aloud for edits. Then, hopefully, I'll be ready to send it to some editors. I haven't read any of it for about three weeks. As time goes on, I get more pessimistic that what I'll find is readable. I hope it's just jitters.

It's just jitters, Jessica. Hang in there. 

Thanks, Susan.

I agree with Susan.  Just the jitters.  I'll bet they go away with the more time you spend on your project.  :)

True, true. Some of it probably is not readable, some is (most, I hope). But the more I work at it, the better I always feel. I'll know soon enough this weekend. Thanks for the support!

I bought "Self editing fro fiction writers" by Renni Browne and David King. I've found this invaluable during the editing processes.

I just wrote a pretty detailed summary of my revision process on my blog, and I remembered this link - if you want to hear how one process-oriented writer does it, you can read about it here:

http://www.melanieconklin.com/2012/03/how-i-tackle-revisions.html

The key to my revision process is a scrap doc - using it allows me to create space, quickly, for better words, without feeling like I've lost anything important!

Thanks, Melanie -- I'll go check out your link.

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