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Comment by Syeda Tasmia Tahia on May 5, 2013 at 1:20pm

Hello Ladies. Anyone here have a moment (or a few, actually) to spare? I am looking some feedback on the 10th chapter of my YA Silent Voices. It is written from a omniscient third-person narrative, focusing on one or two of the for MCs feelings (or silenced voices) in each chapter 

Silent Voices: Meet and Greet

I am slightly worried about the pace of things in my writing...the story takes place between September to March ( around 6 months), but I seem to be bogged down in specific scenes so far. Although I do have a few leaps in the middle, but it still seems to have taken a sluggish pace. Any advice?

Comment by Syeda Tasmia Tahia on April 10, 2013 at 7:45pm

"The gentle rose that was a mirage, the solitary prince who searched what he knew nothttp://http://ning.it/10NcwRX Silent Voice Ch-10..."

Silent Voices: Four extraordinary people, young of blood, kind at heart, strong of will, but rash at actions...living in their own worlds, following isolated paths to their own goals...when the paths cross, the worlds shall crash...into a complex bonds of relationships...Because in a world where wants precede needs, only two can survive happily...

Comment by Betty Larrea on March 19, 2013 at 9:22am

Missing Pieces- A Muse Mondays Poem on my blog...

http://beyogabelove.wordpress.com/

Comment by Betty Larrea on March 5, 2013 at 10:20am

I just started a MUSE MONDAYS feature on my blog with a weekly poem every Monday to inspire you!  Poetry is so good for the soul...

 http://beyogabelove.wordpress.com/2013/03/04/blurring-the-lines-poem/

Comment by Deborah Hollins on October 16, 2012 at 10:49am

Thank you, Karen, for taking the time to read and comment.  Many blessings.

Comment by Karen M Adrian on October 15, 2012 at 6:38pm

Deborah, those are beautiful words, a heart-felt prayer that many of us can relate to.  Thank you.

Comment by Deborah Hollins on October 15, 2012 at 2:21pm

Walk with me each step I take
my blessed God
Hold me up when I am weak
and my soul lost
Grant me the sight when I am blind
to see you there
‘Til every breath that leaves my lips
is a prayer.
http://divinesource.blogspot.ca/2012/10/song-to-my-beloved.html

Comment by Deborah Hollins on September 15, 2012 at 1:12pm

Despite the sound of my Beloved’s call

I hid beneath the tree.

In fear I trembled so that leaves did fall

and soon did bury me.

But my Love’s beckoning could still be heard,

my ears drawn to Loves’ word.

http://divinesource.blogspot.ca/2012/09/my-beloveds-call.html

Comment by Deborah Hollins on August 28, 2012 at 11:05am

Let this prayer permeate the universe, live fiercely within me and flow determinedly from my tongue.
http://ning.it/NAEwRz

Comment by Deborah Hollins on July 21, 2012 at 12:08pm

The soul she will dance us out of the church, gently closing the bible with a kiss, and we will then be found in our Beloved’s truest home and among our Beloved’s children. http://divinesource.blogspot.ca/

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