Shannon Alexander's Discussions

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"Don't sweat the word count, just be sure every word counts! Har! It's okay. You c…" Shannon Alexander replied May 6, 2011 to Another query approach . . .	11	May 6, 2011 Reply by Candy Fite
"I haven't read the first query, so my comments are strictly based on this one. Firs…" Shannon Alexander replied May 5, 2011 to Another query approach . . .	11	May 6, 2011 Reply by Candy Fite
"I'd move the first paragraph to the end and bring back your original first sentence.…" Shannon Alexander replied Apr 8, 2011 to The Eighth Gate (Query)	21	Apr 8, 2011 Reply by Abigail Boone
"I went back and combined a few things from the original and this rewrite. Something…" Shannon Alexander replied Apr 4, 2011 to The Eighth Gate (Query)	21	Apr 8, 2011 Reply by Abigail Boone
"Welcome to the site and the group. I'm sure you'll get lots of great advice. That…" Shannon Alexander replied Mar 31, 2011 to Query for Alannian and the Sword of Azallyan	4	Mar 31, 2011 Reply by Matthew Mallicoat
"Still confusing. I guess I feel like they aren't really that different. Roan's dem…" Shannon Alexander replied Mar 29, 2011 to The Eighth Gate (Query)	21	Apr 8, 2011 Reply by Abigail Boone
"I love the title. I also think your newest version looks good. There is only one s…" Shannon Alexander replied Mar 29, 2011 to How Can I Make this better? Shorter? More specific?	20	Dec 5, 2012 Reply by sara selznick
"Nice one, Michelle! Clears up two problems at once." Shannon Alexander replied Mar 29, 2011 to How Can I Make this better? Shorter? More specific?	20	Dec 5, 2012 Reply by sara selznick
"Following Michelle's response, might I suggest you rephrase the bio information and…" Shannon Alexander replied Mar 28, 2011 to The Eighth Gate (Query)	21	Apr 8, 2011 Reply by Abigail Boone
"I didn't feel like the query actually started until your third paragraph. Even then…" Shannon Alexander replied Mar 24, 2011 to Another GO at this query #3! Please TELL ME what you think!	3	Mar 24, 2011 Reply by Shannon Alexander

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"Don't sweat the word count, just be sure every word counts! Har! It's okay. You c…"

Shannon Alexander replied May 6, 2011 to Another query approach . . .

May 6, 2011
Reply by Candy Fite

"I haven't read the first query, so my comments are strictly based on this one. Firs…"

Shannon Alexander replied May 5, 2011 to Another query approach . . .

May 6, 2011
Reply by Candy Fite

"I'd move the first paragraph to the end and bring back your original first sentence.…"

Shannon Alexander replied Apr 8, 2011 to The Eighth Gate (Query)

Apr 8, 2011
Reply by Abigail Boone

"I went back and combined a few things from the original and this rewrite. Something…"

Shannon Alexander replied Apr 4, 2011 to The Eighth Gate (Query)

Apr 8, 2011
Reply by Abigail Boone

"Welcome to the site and the group. I'm sure you'll get lots of great advice. That…"

Shannon Alexander replied Mar 31, 2011 to Query for Alannian and the Sword of Azallyan

Mar 31, 2011
Reply by Matthew Mallicoat

"Still confusing. I guess I feel like they aren't really that different. Roan's dem…"

Shannon Alexander replied Mar 29, 2011 to The Eighth Gate (Query)

Apr 8, 2011
Reply by Abigail Boone

"I love the title. I also think your newest version looks good. There is only one s…"

Shannon Alexander replied Mar 29, 2011 to How Can I Make this better? Shorter? More specific?

Dec 5, 2012
Reply by sara selznick

"Nice one, Michelle! Clears up two problems at once."

Shannon Alexander replied Mar 29, 2011 to How Can I Make this better? Shorter? More specific?

Dec 5, 2012
Reply by sara selznick

"Following Michelle's response, might I suggest you rephrase the bio information and…"

Shannon Alexander replied Mar 28, 2011 to The Eighth Gate (Query)

Apr 8, 2011
Reply by Abigail Boone

"I didn't feel like the query actually started until your third paragraph. Even then…"

Shannon Alexander replied Mar 24, 2011 to Another GO at this query #3! Please TELL ME what you think!

Mar 24, 2011
Reply by Shannon Alexander

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Shannon Alexander's Discussions (63)

"Don't sweat the word count, just be sure every word counts! Har! It's okay. You c…"

"I haven't read the first query, so my comments are strictly based on this one. Firs…"

"I'd move the first paragraph to the end and bring back your original first sentence.…"

"I went back and combined a few things from the original and this rewrite. Something…"

"Welcome to the site and the group. I'm sure you'll get lots of great advice. That…"

"Still confusing. I guess I feel like they aren't really that different. Roan's dem…"

"I love the title. I also think your newest version looks good. There is only one s…"

"Nice one, Michelle! Clears up two problems at once."

"Following Michelle's response, might I suggest you rephrase the bio information and…"

"I didn't feel like the query actually started until your third paragraph. Even then…"

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