Decided to finally be brave and share the beginning of my novel to get some feedback on! I've posted before and said that the only people that have read my stuff are friends and family. While outside opinions are scary to me, I think they're necessary, so thank you in advance to anyone that reads this!
Some thoughts from me, for what they're worth—please see 'comment boxes' in the attachment. A disclaimer: I don’t write (or read) YA, or adult paranormal for that matter.
Some overall impressions: