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Comment by Ruth Feiertag on May 5, 2013 at 3:02pm

Syeda,

I added comments to the page where you have your chapters posted. Your novel looks as if it's going to be a good read. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Ruth

Comment by Syeda Tasmia Tahia on May 5, 2013 at 1:21pm

Hello Ladies. Anyone here have a moment (or a few, actually) to spare? I am looking some feedback on the 10th chapter of my YA Silent Voices. It is written from a omniscient third-person narrative, focusing on one or two of the for MCs feelings (or silenced voices) in each chapter 

Silent Voices: Meet and Greet

I am slightly worried about the pace of things in my writing...the story takes place between September to March ( around 6 months), but I seem to be bogged down in specific scenes so far. Although I do have a few leaps in the middle, but it still seems to have taken a sluggish pace. Any advice?

Comment by Wendy M Thomas on April 17, 2013 at 9:36am

Hi all. I read and write romance, both supernatural and modern. All are short stories under 50 pages. Most are under 30 pages. Adults only to read for me.

I am willing to read anything except horror. Nothing to scary pleas.

Comment by Syeda Tasmia Tahia on April 10, 2013 at 7:46pm

"The gentle rose that was a mirage, the solitary prince who searched what he knew nothttp://http://ning.it/10NcwRX Silent Voice Ch-10..."

Silent Voices: Four extraordinary people, young of blood, kind at heart, strong of will, but rash at actions...living in their own worlds, following isolated paths to their own goals...when the paths cross, the worlds shall crash...into a complex bonds of relationships...Because in a world where wants precede needs, only two can survive happily...

Comment by Harleen Mittal on February 26, 2013 at 9:30pm

Hi there! My name is Harleen and I'm new to She Writes so forgive me if I botch this up... I'm working on my first fiction young adult/fantasy novel. And I'd appreciate an feedback you might have.

I also would love to help critique and give feedback! I'm not really great at copy-editing but I can definitely give more generalized editorial comments! I like to read fantasy and young adult novels mostly, but I'm open to others as well.

Here's to destroying the blinking cursor of death! 

Cheers!

Comment by sara selznick on February 14, 2013 at 3:38pm

Has anybody seen Cece Box's new webpage? She is a member of this group, did lots of critiquing when we first were on. This is the website: 

http://cecebox.com/hanis-story/

and here's her lovely lure line:

Hani’s Story

 

 

 

It’s a literary adventure story…

It’s an experiment in multimedia storytelling…

It’s feminist chick-lit…

It’s a mystery suspense action thriller romance…

It’s a Love story – with a capital L.

Shakespearean themes

Jungian Archetypes

Cliff-hanging episodes!

It’s (oh no!) sci-fi-fan-fic…

One woman’s very down-to-Earth spiritual quest

across time and space…

Hani’s Story

coming soon to a website near you…

I have read an earlier draft of it, as has my local critique group, and I think it's wonderful. Take some time, enjoy the read, and be surprised as the depth of what you learn by the end. I never expected it to be profound. 

Comment by Christine Koehler on December 20, 2012 at 12:52pm

Screenplays, first ten pages, dialogue...

Comment by Syeda Tasmia Tahia on December 4, 2012 at 5:29am

Teenage dreams in the selfish world of glamour. Losing innocence or gaining her true self? http://ning.it/UlSXNJFeedback very welcome!" Chapter 9 of YA Silen Voices.

Silent Voices: Four extraordinary people, young of blood, kind at heart, strong of will, but rash at actions...living in their own worlds, following isolated paths to their own goals...when the paths cross, the worlds shall crash...into a complex bonds of relationships...Because in a world where wants precede needs, only two can survive happily...

Comment by Lizbeth Meredith on December 3, 2012 at 4:43pm

Hi Elizabeth,

I'm happy to look at your short story if you still have need.

Thanks, 
Lizbeth

Comment by Elizabeth Pagel-Hogan on November 25, 2012 at 12:58pm

Hello - I have a non-fiction essay that an editor has already read once and returned to me asking for some specific changes. I'd love to have someone take a look and see if I have fulfilled the editor's requests! It's about 1100 words. It's also a somewhat short deadline, I'd love to have it back to the editor by the end of this week.

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