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Are you in the process of writing your first novel? Share the ups and downs of your narrative journey!

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"Mixed Messages" FREE on Kindle

Started by Patricia Gligor. Last reply by Patricia Gligor Apr 26. 2 Replies

"Mixed Messages" is the first novel in my Malone mystery series. For those of you who are still struggling to find a publisher for your first novel, I'd like you to remember these words: "If you can…Continue

Tags: killer, serial, suspense, mystery

The World of Pacing! Need assistance Please :-)

Started by T. Swift. Last reply by Jenny Apr 24. 5 Replies

Hi ladies,I am writing my first YA novel and I am in the beginning pages and realized that I have a pacing problem. I do not want to have this problem and I want it fixed. I know an editor at a…Continue

NEEDING A CRITIQUE

Started by Mercedes-Benz Taylor. Last reply by Mercedes-Benz Taylor Mar 12. 2 Replies

Hello all!I have a story that I have been working on for the past six years and I am almost ready for publication but I have a problem - I have never written a short synopsis found on the back cover…Continue

I've posted chapter one of the novel I'm working on

Started by Becca Martin Mar 12. 0 Replies

I've also added a note and a caveat. If you have tips to make the story better, please let me know! Thanks so much!…Continue

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Comment by Shannon Alexander 2 hours ago

Alison - check out She Writes Query Critique v 2.0 group. I've gotten good feedback there in the past. Also, Agent Query Connect is a great source too (but be prepared to pay it forward there and offer others critiques in exchange for your own).

Comment by Alison Kucich 2 hours ago

Hello, writers!  I'm looking for a "query critique" group... anyone know of one?  I'm on my fourth draft of this bad boy and it still doesn't have the "special hook." I've taken a class, and had it reviewed (and picked apart) by agents at conferences, so I know it needs work!  Thanks! 

Comment by JD Combs on Wednesday

Hello Fellow Writers! I have exciting news to share! I just published my first novel called The Point of No Return.  It is available on Amazon both as a paperback and on Kindle.  I would love for you all to fall in love with my story and my characters as much as I did!  I hope you enjoy and happy writing to all!

Comment by Rev. LaWaughn Rouse on May 16, 2013 at 5:05pm

I just did the same thing as a vintage lady I waited until I was 60 to take this great leap of faith. I did everything that I had to do before I reached back into my heart's desire and knew that once retired I would have to try...so I learn from all of you wonderful ladies at she writes and this novice just did it...the hard part I thought would be putting it together or self-publishing...no the hard part is marketing it...mother didn't tell me that it would be days like this...my baby is now out in the world and I have to raise it while its sisters and brothers threaten to be born...I don't know now that I think about it I'm not sure if I should have waited to old age to live my dream but then again it has given me a whole new life and I think I've been blessed with another ten years...therefore instead of being 60 I'm now 50..if I write another I might get to be 40...if I keep it going I could see 30 again...lol if you ever wanted to read this old age baby stop pass my website as I write in my pen name...SaBrowny Rae...visit me at   www.sabrownyraebooks.com now back to writing the sisters and brothers to the new baby...love you all and I have been away for a long while RevLa

Comment by Jessica Vealitzek on May 9, 2013 at 6:32pm

I'm not on this thread as often as I'd like, but congrats to Natalie and welcome, Elisabeth!

Comment by Karen A. Wyle on May 7, 2013 at 2:40pm

Mazel tov, Natalie! It's an awesome feeling indeed!

Comment by Natalie P. Kennerly on May 7, 2013 at 12:43pm

Hello Ladies.  After 15 years,  I finally self-published my first novel on May 6, 2013.  To my defense I started as a teen...LOL  It actually took me around 9 months to write, edit, and publish "My Brother's Keeper".  Wow just realized...9 months...it's as if I birthed a child. With all the blood sweat and tears, it sure feels like I did...LOL.  The toughest part for me was the first edit...Sheesh!!!  That was brutual.  I actually cut almost 15K words the first time around.  I believe I quit twice and theartend my book with a match and some gasoline three times.  But its all worth it when you hold that book in your hands, and look down and see your full name in print.  It's an awesome feeling.  Keep up the work ladies, and allow those creative juices to flow.

www.nataliepkennerly.com

Comment by Syeda Tasmia Tahia on May 5, 2013 at 1:16pm

Hello Ladies. Anyone here have a moment (or a few, actually) to spare? I am looking some feedback on the 10th chapter of my YA Silent Voices. It is written from a omniscient third-person narrative, focusing on one or two of the for MCs feelings (or silenced voices) in each chapter 

Silent Voices: Meet and Greet

Comment by Syeda Tasmia Tahia on April 12, 2013 at 12:08pm

"The gentle rose that was a mirage, the solitary prince who searched what he knew not http://ning.it/10NcwRX Silent Voice Ch-10..."

Silent Voices: Four extraordinary people, young of blood, kind at heart, strong of will, but rash at actions...living in their own worlds, following isolated paths to their own goals...when the paths cross, the worlds shall crash...into a complex bonds of relationships...Because in a world where wants precede needs, only two can survive happily...

Comment by Syeda Tasmia Tahia on April 12, 2013 at 12:06pm

"The gentle rose that was a mirage, the solitary prince who searched what he knew not http://ning.it/10NcwRX Silent Voice Ch-10..."

Silent Voices: Four extraordinary people, young of blood, kind at heart, strong of will, but rash at actions...living in their own worlds, following isolated paths to their own goals...when the paths cross, the worlds shall crash...into a complex bonds of relationships...Because in a world where wants precede needs, only two can survive happily...

 

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