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Carmen Esposito commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"The onslaught of the Phluvoghians continued undeterred forcing Veudan and Drokkan back into the mines while tendrils of smoke rose from the molten lump that used to be a medi-bed.
“How many plasma grenades do we have left?”…"
Carlos commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"Faasha, Faasha, my dear, wake up,- a deep and sweet voice whispered in her ear, slowly bringing her to the conscious level, while a firm hand that grabbed her shoulder shaked her softly .Sleepily, Faasha slowly…"
Carlos commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"Hi Jane, thank you for joining us. You are welcome and please feel free to write any genre and comment on any subject in this space. Feel at home.
Carlos"
Carmen Esposito commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"The Biogeometer’s signal bleeped in shorter intervals as they approached the mines on the left outermost edge of the mountains. Veudan, his shoulders hunched, led - his phaser rifle set on level three. He wasn’t taking any…"
Carlos commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"Unaware of Drokkan´s decision, crewman Inertia realized that they were trapped in the cave, beside her, the body of her captain remained moveless. heavily breathing, wounded with a crystal rock splinter embedded in the back of her left…"
Carmen Esposito commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"As soon as the Shuttle Bay doors opened, the shuttle darted forward at full speed with Drokkan at the helm. Loecus manned the navigation controls while Veudan monitored the tactical controls for hostile forces. The electromagnetic waves…"
Carlos commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"Outside the cave, the electromagnetic storm that lashed the northern part of the planet, grew in intensity, thick belts of green and purple clouds spun at breakneck speed, dumping on the surface a rain of electrons spheres that exploded before…"
Carmen Esposito commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"Her own communicator had been damaged in the attack so she tapped her Captain’s communicator. “Crewman Inertia to Bridge” The hoarse whisper of the Crewman was barely audible through the distortion, but Drokkan’s heightened…"
Carlos commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"An imperceptible tremor in Inertia´s right hand forefinger rippled the puddle where it rested motionless for hours. The dim and nauseous atmosphere choked her breath as she slowly waked coughing, feeling with each heave the…"
Carmen Esposito commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"Faasha felt her body coalesce as her molecules came together. The process took seconds but felt arduously slow to her. A member of her crew was missing and possibly hurt; she didn’t have time to waste. She crouched behind a…"
Carlos left a comment for Sierra Writers
"I am friend of Sierra Club trekkers, now I am honored and pleased with your invitation to be friend of the Sierra Writers, thank you."
Carlos left a comment for Night Owl Reviews (Tammie King)
"Proud to be your friend, thank you for the invitation"
Carlos commented on the group 'She alien, she writer'
"Good idea Carmen, let me try to continue with your story.
In another dimension, lying beaten unconcious on a wet and pestilent floor of a dark and sinister phluvoighian cave, Immogen Inertia the young Cardian orphan, still bleeding from…"
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Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)"You could have a section of the story where you explain the character name.
For example: in my stories I have a character whose name is Gill. She is a girl and her name is pronounced Jill short for Jillian (Gillian). In the beginning of the current…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)"I wish I could like this comment or something. You immediately reminded me of this coworker I had about a year ago. We did accounting work together and we had this one group that had a long abbreviation (to this day I could not tell you off the top…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)"HAHA! That is hilarious! I could just imagine sitting and reading a really great book and then coming across the MC's name after having struggled with it from page 1. I have to just come up with an alternative lol. Like sometimes I come up with…"
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