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The Tenth
This is a short story I wrote for a recent class. Any feedback is appreciated.===The TenthStephanie waited in the wings as the ensemble members took their bows. She bounced on her toes, the adrenaline from the show still coursing through her veins, a high she knew could never be duplicated chemically. Too bad, she thought, not for the first time, someone could make a killing if they could bottle this.She felt Callie’s long, lean fingers twine their way between hers. Her co-star grinned and…See More
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The Tenth
Posted on September 11, 2010 at 8:13am 2 Comments 0 Likes
This is a short story I wrote for a recent class. Any feedback is appreciated.
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The Tenth
Stephanie waited in the wings as the ensemble members took their bows. She bounced on her toes, the adrenaline from the show still coursing through her veins, a high she knew could never be duplicated chemically. Too bad, she thought, not for the first time, someone could make a killing if they could bottle this.
She felt Callie’s long, lean… Continue
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The Tenth
Stephanie waited in the wings as the ensemble members took their bows. She bounced on her toes, the adrenaline from the show still coursing through her veins, a high she knew could never be duplicated chemically. Too bad, she thought, not for the first time, someone could make a killing if they could bottle this.
She felt Callie’s long, lean… Continue
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- At 2:28pm on April 30, 2010,
Meg Waite Clayton said… - Glad to have you join us in Novelist – Struggling or Not, Kari. You might jump in by telling us what you’re working on in the “Show Me Your Novel and I’ll Show You Mine” discussion. I’ll look forward to chatting with you!
Meg Waite Clayton
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- At 9:56am on April 30, 2010,
Nicky Wheeler-Nicholson Brown said… - Wow Kari! Great blog. Welcome to the Southern Writers Group. Ditto Rebecca's remark on livening up. Absolutely feel free to jump in over there. Introduce yourself. Start a discussion. Make yourself at home. Best, Nicky
- At 4:31am on April 30, 2010,
Rebecca Coffey said… - Kari,
Welcome to Flash and Micro | Fiction & Nonfiction. We need livening up! Please help! (I love your blog.)
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