This is a wonderful piece Jessica. I would perhaps re-work the ending so it doesn't close so broadly. Focus on a small detail that wraps the story up, since the piece is filled with beautiful small details.
Thanks, Gala- I'm still trying to find my way around the site and realize what's here- thanks for the warm welcome- I look forward to getting to know everyone here better!
:)
Hey Kathleen,
Welcome to She Writes!
I think you'll find a great community of passionate, inspiring women writers.
Please feel free to drop me a line if you have any questions about making the most of your time on the site.
Saludos!
Gala
I think you'll find a great community of passionate, inspiring women writers.
Please feel free to drop me a line if you have any questions about making the most of your time on the site.
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