"Hi Patricia,
The 4th Chapter of 'Silent Voices' is ready to be read. http://www.shewrites.com/profiles/blogs/silent-voices-the-wounded-w... please do provide me with feedback, and any constructive criticism is very…"
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Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)
"Everyone!! Great news!!
I was able to get my book published on Amazon.com and I would like everyone's support. It's a YA novel called Being Special and if you want to check it out you can click the title. It's available for $1.99…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)
"I completely agree! I'm shocked at the number of people who have involved themselves in the conversation. THIS IS SO EXCITING! I have never been able to discuss books and writing with other people with such depth. I LOVE it"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)
"But would we want to really want to limit ourselves as writers to what has already been done? A classic is not nearly just the style of writing but the story itself. I personally have read many books at the young age that I am at (don't ask me…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards commented on the blog post 'Silent Voices: The reckless challenger'
".....wow.
I honestly never saw this one coming. You just took this to a whole new level. This chapter is amazing and it just sucked me in even deeper. What is the deal with his father? How is it that he could bring himself to do the very thing that…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)
"Syeda,
Before you freak out: CALM DOWN! LOL
I probable would have commented on your third chapter just as I did one and two. I haven't had a chance to read it yet. Try not to let silence get your mind into high gear over things that you…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)
"But that's doesn't seem like what she would be doing if she changed her story from what it is to what you suggest. Your suggestion would take her entire idea and reshape it based on something you would do instead. Don't get me wrong.…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards commented on the blog post 'Silent Voices: The Prolong....'
"Do you have any plan on actually creating a film for it? It seems a little out of place to me, but remember that I am only an opinion. I only feel like it's difficult to really take it seriously if I'm hearing this voice in my head…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards commented on the blog post 'Silent Voices: The bright-eyed doe'
"I like that you did your research on that. I only did not know that because I never had a black berry, though I have used a few owned by friends. If I am the first to ask them think nothing of it. Especially if people use the phase in your area. If…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards commented on the blog post 'Silent Voices: The prince of his own world'
"LOL I am so glad that I could help to motivate you. I hope that you finish writing this and it comes out exactly the way you want it to be. I am not so sure about the other lady in the group discussion when she said that she didnt think it was a…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)
"Well reading what she has it would seem that they would all end up learning something from the whole thing. I don't think it makes her story a soap opera for having 4 main characters. There are books like that and what they seem to do is help…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)
"It sounds interesting. I could use a little more information about it though. I am not one to talk (I can't tell people what a book is about without telling them the book LOL) this is a lot better than what I could do. It slightly reminds me of…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards commented on the blog post 'Silent Voices: The prince of his own world'
"I like this guy. I want to believe that he will find what he needs to get some life in his eyes. I cannot help but to want for him to be able to open the windows and breath in the beauty of nature sitting in his own backyard. And the thing I want…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards commented on the blog post 'Silent Voices: The bright-eyed doe'
"It is a great chapter. It does a wonderful job with getting the reader caught up on some background information all while still remaining aloof. My only questions: What is a BBM?"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards commented on the blog post 'Silent Voices: The Prolong....'
"This confuses me just a little bit. I can see the effort you put into trying to attract the reader. I, personally would try not to have that because then it goes overboard and sounds a little forced. I like the way it ends though. The beginning…"
Patricia IluvMr Edwards replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)
"Thank you. I was just telling the last person about my blog continuing after the book. It isn't much yet but if you want you can check it out:
Sonindai.blogspot.com"
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- Who I am:
- I am a writer, daughter, fiancee, and soon to be mother. I love to read and write and I hope what I bring to the world can give that same love to others.
- Connect with me online! My site, blog, or Twitter handle are:
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Twitter:
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Blogspot:
http://sonindai.blogspot.com/
- Books I've written, anthologies I've contributed to, and any scripts or plays I've authored:
- My only published book (currently) is called Being Special. You can find that at Amazon.com or Lulu.com
I am currently focusing on my second book and have a third lined up. I have an idea for a fourth but am waiting to finish these two first and then possibly a sequel to my first.
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- Fiction
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- At 9:11am on June 24, 2012,
Meg Waite Clayton said… Patricia, Belated welcome to the novelist group; we're delighted to have you join us! If you haven’t done so already, you might introduce yourself by telling us what you’re working on in the “Show Me Your Novel and I’ll Show You Mine” discussion. We do a live chat Wednesdays at 1 EST; instructions on how to participate are in the "Our Water Cooler" box near the top of the group page. Do join us! And we save the wall for discussion, but welcome links to helpful blog posts on the “Links to Helpful Blog Posts for Writers” discussion thread.
Meg Waite Clayton
Novelist Group Moderator
Bestselling Author of four novels, including The Wednesday Sisters, (a writing group novel), and the forthcoming The Wednesday Daughters (all Random House/Ballantine)
- At 4:41pm on June 16, 2012,
Syeda Tasmia Tahia said… Hi Patricia,
The 4th Chapter of 'Silent Voices' is ready to be read. http://www.shewrites.com/profiles/blogs/silent-voices-the-wounded-w... please do provide me with feedback, and any constructive criticism is very welcome. I would love to know what feel one feels towards the character, and also if possible, how he connects and compares with the other characters. Now that all four of them are introduced, I would love to hear what comparisons, compassions and connections you make between the characters themselves and with the reader. Thanks for your help in advance!
Syeda
- At 4:47pm on June 3, 2012,
Jill Starishevsky said…
Welcome to SheWrites. Feel free to reach out if you need anything.
Jill Starishevsky
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- At 12:04pm on June 3, 2012,
Jennifer Lauck said… - Hi and let me be one of the first to welcome you to Shewrites. This is a terrific site, tons of resources and innovative info. As my own bonus, you have access to my teaching site and free teachings on memoir. Just click here and sign up. No spam, I promise. Just great teaching tips. Enjoy! XO Jennifer
- At 9:20am on June 3, 2012,
Caitlyn Levin said… Hello,
Welcome to She Writes! We're excited to have you here.
You can check out the Getting Started section to help you find your way around, or a great way to jump in is to get involved with our Groups and Live Chats.
Feel free to let me know if you have any questions!All the best,
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