"I do appreciate all of you all's input. Penelope, you're right, the titles i have pitched to you ladies may sound Gothic, but it's not my intention to make it seem that way at all. Penelope, how can you give an opinion on something…"
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Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"@Ana, that's true because I know there are 4 books with the title Enchantress. 2 of them were best sellers. I'm just trying to get a point across that my book is neither Gothic or fantasy. Something I think Penelope and Nancy don't…"
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"@Penelope, yes she is an active practicing witch. I do understand what you're saying, but it's not fantasy. Her Nemesis sounds really catchy, and I like it. It's a romantic suspense novel. The original title I had was "Deadly…"
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"@Nance and Penelope. Please don't misunderstand me. My book is not a Gothic romance. The character is a witch. What part of that don't you ladies understand. Yes, the titles I was kicking around may sound a little out there, but they were…"
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"@Ana And Penelope. They are a little dramatic..Ana, I was thinking about just Nemesis or perhaps Temptress or Enchantress..I'll be thinking of some more and kick around. Thanks again guys. Greatly appreciated."
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"Please Critique,
After doing more research, I found that there are 161 different meanings to the word evil. It's a challenge to try and put together a title that fits. I came up with some suggestions. Please advise. Thanks in advance.…"
Ronda N. Johnson left a comment for Ana Kenley
"Anna, thank you for the information. I'm working out the suggestions you made. Though I've been writing for years, pulling together words to describe my character has been a challenge. I've had some help though with coming up with…"
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"Thank you ladies for your comments. This is a learning process, and I appreciate the help of suggestions and a group like this. This is definitely a motivator. Thank you ladies again. I'm going to work out this query letter."
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"Thank you Nancy..I'm working out the kinks now. I appreciate your feedback."
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"Francine, Thank you so much. I did go a little overboard with the synopsis. It is a bit lengthy. I'm still fiddling with other names. I used Adversary because Shanna's intentions are not in Madison's best interests. I've been…"
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"@Penelope, I always thought a synopsis was a short detailed description of the whole book, which is what I did. At any rate, the target audience of the synopsis is for readers of a suspense novels. It is meant as a genre."
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"A couple of weeks ago, I threw out a name for my novel..I got some replies, but I was told I needed a synopsis. Can I please get some feedback on my synopsis. thank you.."
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"Deadly Adversary (synopsis)
Madison Levie is a young, beautiful photography student who have big dreams of becoming the next big thing in photography. She has everything going for her; a bright career as a photographer, a rich fiancé, and a…"
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"Thank you all for your feedback. I do have a synopsis, but after editing it, I have to redo it over. I'm working on that as we speak. When completed, I will have a full review along with a synopsis. Thank you all again."
Ronda N. Johnson commented on the group 'Virtual Critique Group'
"Hello Everyone,
I have been searching for a critique group. I need some constructive criticism. I'm in the final stage of completing my novel entitled "Deadly Adversary". I'm still toying with the title, but so far, It's the…"
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My First Writing Project-Deadly Ally
Posted on July 30, 2010 at 10:39pm 0 Comments 0 Likes
Almost 20 years ago, I started on my first fiction novel "Deadly Ally". I decided to write a novel that would become a series of 6 parts. The concept of "Deadly Ally" came about one night while choosing names for my characters. I've read and enjoyed reading other authors such as John Gresham, Jackie Collins, Zane, to name a few. Fiction writing became my forte, because I have a creative imagination, and I can tell an interesting story. In the early stages of "Deadly Ally", I wanted to implement… Continue
Would you consider taking him/her back?
Posted on July 29, 2010 at 11:23pm 0 Comments 0 Likes
As I sometimes sit and remember the times we had, I ponder on that question "will I take him back"? If I had a dollar for the ones I would have considered taking back, I wouldn't have much. Speaking from experience, I have went down that road of giving second and sometimes third chances. In the end, I came out getting the short end of the stick.
Looking back on the ones I would consider, there are several factors as to why I would and why I would not consider taking him back. One… Continue
Looking back on the ones I would consider, there are several factors as to why I would and why I would not consider taking him back. One… Continue
Comment Wall (4 comments)
- At 5:26am on July 30, 2010,
Sarah Pinneo said… - Welcome to the fiction forum!
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- At 12:08am on July 30, 2010,
Fran Lee said… - Welcome to She Writes Romance!
- At 7:33am on July 23, 2010,
Meg Waite Clayton said… - Rhonda, Adding my voice to the welcome. If you’re looking for a place to jump in, we’d love to have you join us in the Publishing Industry News group, or in Novelists – Struggling or Not.
Hope you enjoy the site!
Meg Waite Clayton
Moderator, Publishing Industry News, and Novelist Group
Author of the national bestseller The Wednesday Sisters, The Language of Light, a Bellwether Prize finalist, and the forthcoming The Four Ms. Bradwells (Ballantine, March 2011)
- At 8:57pm on July 22, 2010,
AnnaBeth Hawkins Davidson said… - Welcome to SheWrites!As a writer, you are about to love this place and all it offers to us. Explore the groups first and find some of the places that you will fit. If you have any questions please let me know. Glad you are here among us girls.
AnnaBeth
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Catrina Barton replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)"Hello Karen, welcome to the group.
I've recently had some encouraging critique on the first two chapters of my YA Paranormal Romance "Dangerous Temptation." It's nice to see our hard work shaping up, huh?"
Karen Banes replied to the discussion 'Show Me Your Novel and I'll Show You Mine' in the group Novelists (Struggling or Not)"Just thought I'd stop by and introduce myself. I'm working on a YA speculative fiction novel and keep getting stuck. But I've just had an encouraging critique of the first two chapters so determined to push on. Really interested to…"
Karen Banes replied to the discussion 'What did you blog about Today?' in the group Blogging about Books and Writing!"I was able to offer readers a potentially free ebook today. The lovely Shelley Hitz, who I work with as an affiliate, is giving away a copy of Book Marketing 101 to anyone who buys any of her other products through my site this month.…"
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