I want to encourage women to submit to humor venues. I urge you; I implore you. Let’s start a revolution and change the world’s mind about who’s funny. Your heart will swell with accomplishment and your breasts will become larger. This I promise.
"Someone who reads it and gives me constructive feedback: what they liked and what areas could be improved on, preferably with recommendations for further reading.
(I liked x and y. Your writing could be more concise. Try Raymond Carver.)"