"Alison - check out She Writes Query Critique v 2.0 group. I've gotten good feedback there in the past. Also, Agent Query Connect is a great source too (but be prepared to pay it forward there and offer others critiques in exchange for your own)."
A poet's blog
Wonder
How your dark lashes veil a sure and tested sounding
And, how loon crying, echoes the call of dawn on Okanagan Lake.
How a breath of Claire’s freshly washed hair somehow expands my lungs
And, how my lips feel, against your unshaven cheek.
How the backyard lilac opening, diffuses a heady spring
And, summer breaks, under my tongue, with chocolate bits of a dipped DQ cone.
And the way I feel,
stepping wet from the shower, into your waiting eyes.
Lesley-Anne Evans
2009
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Comment by Lesley-Anne Evans on September 1, 2010 at 2:35pm -
A heart felt thank you for your kind words to me.
Lesley-Anne
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Comment by Cindee Snider Re on September 1, 2010 at 5:39am -
The imagery and emotion are breathtaking! Absolutely beautiful!! I agree with Judith, these are "lines to be savored."
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Comment by Jocelyn Chia on July 25, 2010 at 10:20pm -
i love how you express your appreciation/experience of little but special things in life. that last phrase is very special... "into your waiting eyes".
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Comment by Judith van Praag on July 10, 2010 at 8:47am -
lines to be savored, bit by bit repetitively.
Wonderful imagery and accompanying image as well.
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Comment by Bev Murrill on July 1, 2010 at 11:18am -
Wow, that's beautiful... 'into your waiting eyes...', love it.
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Comment by Beth Atchison on June 16, 2010 at 4:17pm -
This is simply gorgeous!
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