The Art (and Craft) of Delayed Gratification: How I wrote my first e-serial

Almost exactly one year ago, I had the idea to write my fourth novel as an e-book serial – a book published in installments, every week for a set number of weeks.  As a lifelong soap opera junkie, I couldn’t imagine a better idea – the marriage of my two favorite things, trashy television and commercial fiction.

I didn’t anticipate that the process would soon feel more like a crazy creative experiment than the writing of a novel.

As a former literary agent, I’d heard whispers that publishers were looking to take advantage of the e-book format to publish novels serially – you know, the way Dickens used to publish. (Not the e-book part, the serialization part.) I met with one of these publishers, St. Martin’s press, and while they liked the premise of my novel – a romantic drama set in 1920s New York City called The Gin Lovers -- they weren’t completely sold that it had the plot to sustain six twenty-thousand-word “episodes” or installments. While every publisher or self-published writer has their own parameters for what an e-serial should be, my task for St. Martin’s was to craft a story that would unfold over a hundred and twenty thousand words, with enticing breaks  - cliffhangers – every twenty thousand words.

I spent many days and nights brainstorming and outlining with my agent and creative partner, Adam Chromy. Sometimes, the story just seemed like a round peg that had to fit into a square hole, and I wanted to give up. But finally, we mapped out six episodes with one primary romance, multiple subplots, and five cliffhangers. St. Martin’s was on board, I was ready to write, and the clock was ticking: I would deliver the final episode five months later.

I was daunted, but I soon realized that I had done the most difficult part of the job before I even had the job: the outline was solid, and it proved to be my trustworthy roadmap to the finish line. For anyone embarking on an e-serial, I can not stress enough how important it is to have at least a bullet-point outline of where you’re going and how to get there.

Usually, when handing in a novel, the writer finishes the book and then submits it to his or her editor for notes. With the e-serial, I submitted the novel to my editor, Vicki Lame, in pieces – 80 – 90 page pieces. She would then give me notes – usually along the lines of pumping up character motivation or making the cliffhanger more of a, well, hanger. And so I would revise the previous episode while writing my current one, hand that off to her, and start the whole process over again. Then, when the last episode was complete, we went back over it again from the beginning for continuity issues and anything else missed during the broader episode-by-episode edit. It really began feeling like the Mount Everest of novel writing, and I’m sure my editor thought it would never end. I know I did.

But by the summer, The Gin Lovers was finished. As the publication date approached, I saw another major challenge ahead: It was difficult enough to convince readers to buy a novel once. For The Gin Lovers, we were effectively asking them to come back and buy six times. I made this daunting realization when I started asking family members to buy it. I also have to hope that readers will enjoy the delayed gratification that comes with serialization – and that I wrote the novel is such a way that they have those, “I can’t wait to see what happens next!” moments.

The Gin Lovers published on October 8, and only time will tell whether or not readers will embrace the e-serial format. In the meantime, my publisher has planned the publication of the series as one complete e-book, followed by a paperback publication next year. As for me, I’m completely hooked – a glutton for e-serial punishment: I’m already halfway through writing the first episode of my next serial.


Jamie Brenner grew up in Main Line Philadelphia on a steady diet of Judith Krantz, Jackie Collins, and Aaron Spelling. Her latest novel is The Gin Lovers, published as an original e-book serial with St. Martin’s Press. Jamie is the author of the erotic romance trilogy Blue Angel, published under the pseudonym Logan Belle. Also writing as Logan Belle, her upcoming erotic romance Bettie Page Presents: The Librarian will be published by Pocket Star/Simon & Schuster. Jamie has worked in book publishing for over a decade as a scout, publicist, and agent. She lives in New York City.

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Comment by Jamie Brenner on October 21, 2012 at 6:48am

Hi Marcia!

I do remember! It's great to hear from you. A lot of changes in publishing since those days:)

So many more options now...a better time for writers, many challenges for publishers. Please keep in touch! Email me thru website www.jamiebrenner.com  xo

Comment by Marcia Fine on October 20, 2012 at 3:38pm

Hi Jamie! I met you years ago through the Isen and Robinson family and had lunch with you in NYC to talk about my 1st novel, Gossip.com. Remember? I was so excited to read about your serialization! I'm looking into the process for my 6th novel through Byliner. I think it's a great way to entice readers. You're awesome!

Marcia Fine

Comment by Jamie Brenner on October 19, 2012 at 2:30pm

Kamy, Jamie, Christie, Julia, Daphne -- thanks so much for reading and discussing! It's an ongoing conversation and and ongoing experiment to see what works and what doesn't.

Comment by Jamie Brenner on October 19, 2012 at 2:28pm

Kiersi, I really encourage you to go for it. A few writers have done online serials for a while -- one called Denver Serial has been running for years. Now the mainstream publishers are working on their models, but everything is up in the air right now. An open field.

Comment by Jamie Brenner on October 19, 2012 at 2:26pm

Sorry for the delayed responses! I went to an event yesterday afternoon sponsored by Twitter about the future of story telling. It was very interesting and I want to write about it for a future post. In the meantime, spent all day playing catch up on word count!

Comment by Kamy Wicoff on October 19, 2012 at 12:45pm

So curious about this model -- going to go and share on my Facebook page right now!

Comment by Kiersi Burkhart on October 18, 2012 at 12:19pm

This is great. Good to know there are publishers out there willing to cross into the new frontier. I've been batting around the idea of running an online serial. Excited to see how The Gin Lovers pans out for you!

Comment by Jamie Rose on October 18, 2012 at 12:07pm
Fascinating (and helpful) to read this. Congrats!
Comment by christie nelson on October 18, 2012 at 10:47am

I've been toying with this idea, too, and to be privy to Jamie's Mt. Everest e-serial climb is fascinating.  As a former back-packer and current novelist, I get it!  Thanks, Jamie, for the trail map. I'm signing up for Gin Lovers now. 

Comment by Julia Munroe Martin on October 18, 2012 at 10:37am

This is really fascinating and something I've always thought would be interesting to try. So I really loved reading about your experiences!

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