Thanks Jenna! I didn't intend for my character to be an alcoholic... it just sort of happened. I'm trying to make her not be the stereotypical alcoholic. I want her to feel like a real person who's struggling.
Hi Jenna, I got your message about wanting to join 'that' group, and have approved you. If you'd like to talk about the subject itself, you might want to email me at my personal email...Lauren [at] LaurenBDavis.com.
"Alison - check out She Writes Query Critique v 2.0 group. I've gotten good feedback there in the past. Also, Agent Query Connect is a great source too (but be prepared to pay it forward there and offer others critiques in exchange for your own)."
"Meg, great news! Congratulations! Now, on to query letters... do any of you know of or have a "query critique" group? I'm on my fourth draft of this bad boy and have recently had it picked apart by a prominent agent…"