Hello, Rebecca! Wow. Take what you can use and ignore the rest. :-)
Kudos to your bio, but you should definitely stick to 1st person. If it were me, I'd leave out the...
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Hi Marilyn! This query sounds rushed to me--a ton of information and world building in what feels like a single rapid breath.
Try introducing the story in a slightly more orderly way. Read it aloud, as if to someone who'd never heard of it before.
I hope that helps!
S.
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Candy, I think you're right about the first graph.
Could you take a look at the draft I just posted. Hate to ask, but. . .
Complex is right. I do think it's a big n...
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Honoring my Soul
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Antonia Teresa Amore-Broccoli
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The moon entered into bold, take charge and self-confident Air...
Something About Sammy
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This is a wonderful story that has breath and depth. It shows the longing of love in all its beauty. It can deeply affect a pe...
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Beautiful! So beautifully said! Thank you.
As a journaling teacher for over three deca...hear our voices and words, drops us into a listening, reflective-contemplative mode wherein we are received. Rece...
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Feeling a little lonely on the HuffPo beach, are you? Just one more grain of sand being shifted about with the ebb and flow of a fickle and often not well-read public...
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I feel for you, Deborah. It's a very hard good-bye to a cherished project, dream, and spiritual "baby." And yet, it is also such a liberation when the sacrifice is mad...
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