I am offering a free critique of the first two pages of your fantasy, romance or paranormal story in order to celebrate the launch of my new fantasy e-novella Ashuliya. 

The opening critique will contain the following:

1) Is the opening of the story interesting enough to engage the reader?

2) Is the protagonist or the main character in the opening interesting and/or likeable?

3) Is the writing style good?

4) Are there many grammar and/or typing errors?

5) Would I want to read the rest of the story based on this opening?

In addition I will give my comments and suggestion on improving the opening of your story. If you are interested in availing this offer, please email me at mail (at) sabineareed (dot) com or you can contact me through the contact form on my website. I am only accepting stories in the genres of fantasy, romance and paranormal.