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SCENE2.

1.WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF THIS SCENE? A TRANSITIONAL SCENE.

2.  HOW IS THIS SCENE RELATED TO THE SCENE IMMEDIATELY BEFORE/ AFTER? ALEX IS SITTING ON THE DOORSTEP OUTSIDE OF THIS HOUSE.  THIS ACTION IS GOING ON INSIDE THIS HOUSE.

3. WHAT CHARACTERS ARE INVOLVED IN THIS SCENE? PETER IAN PAIGE. (PIP) MAIN PROTAGONIST.   THEODOLPHUS MERTON. THE BUTLER. WILLIAM PAIGE PIP’S FATHER. AMANDA TREHERNE PIPS MOTHER. SHELBY PATRICIA WALKER MAIN ANTAGONIST. ABOUT TO BE DISMISSED AS PIPS CAREGIVER. LEE KEMP. POLICE OFFICER. FRANK JESSOP. POLICE OFFICER

4.WHAT IS THE SETTING?  THE INTERIOR OF 21 GARDEN CLOSE. PIPS HOME.

5. WHAT IS AT STAKE FOR THE PROTAGONIST IN THIS SCENE?  SHELBY’S THREATS. ALEX MEETS A NEMESIS.

6.WHAT IS THE CONFLICT OF THIS SCENE?  SHELBY’S ASSAULT ON MERTON AND ATTEMPTED ASSAULT ON PIP AND ALEX. SHELBY RESISTING ARREST. 

7. HOW DOES THIS SCENE FURTHER DEVELOP IN THIS PLOT? WE MEET SHELBY’S TWIN BROTHER. AND HIS LAWYER RANDOLPH MANNING. ALEX HAS MADE AN ENEMY UNKNOWINGLY THROUGH ACTIONS TAKEN BY HER UNCLE DOMENIC A PROSECUTING LAWYER IN THE HIGH COURT??? (REF)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        

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  • Edith O Nuallain

    I am so impressed with your outlining. You have such a firm hold of your characters and plot.