The Best Writing Advice Changes Everything
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Brooke Warner
September 2016
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Written by
Brooke Warner
September 2016
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This summer I was invited to the Mendocino Writers Conference, where at the opening reception in downtown Mendocino (where one can’t help but evoke Jessica Fletcher of Murder, She Wrote) each presenter was asked to come to the microphone to share their best piece of writing advice. I was inspired by what people chose to impart, but more important, I was moved by how each person remembered who had imparted the advice, and how, in effect, that person’s wisdom lived on, carried along by the group share in the tradition of storytelling as it’s existed for thousands of years. It’s occurred to me since that good advice can only come from the heart, and its staying power is serious business.

My own best piece of advice came from my friend, the poet and author Mark Nepo, in the form of a personal share, where he was teaching without even realizing he was doing so (which is very much his style). I’ve since shared his words in so many situations because they moved me. He said, in mulling over his own recent fame and attention for his writing, “I’m so glad I kept writing when no one was listening.” To me, this reflection was a lesson for others—that we can pressure test our own reasons for showing up to what we do for the quiet gifts, and not just for what we hope is on the other side. Yes, we all want attention for our writing, but would you do it—and be glad about it—if you were never noticed? Or if you knew you’d never be noticed? It’s a question every writer should ask themselves.

 

Other presenters shared their best advice, and I punched the gist of those remarks into my phone:

  • Do something related to your writing every day.
  • Write selfishly.
  • Make it fun.
  • Follow your own thread.
  • Write like a motherfucker. (This one I knew already, from the indomitable Cheryl Strayed.)


During the writing of this post I reached out to other writers I know for their best advice, and what follows is a sampling of what people wrote back to me.

 

Dani Shapiro, author of many books, including the beautiful memoir Devotion, wrote:

Grace Paley used to tell me that she wrote in the bathtub.  When I was her student, I thought this meant she wrote in the bath.  Years later, I realized that it was great advice about knowing when to step away from the desk and dream.

 

Christina Baker Kline, New York Times best-selling author of Orphan Train, who has another much-anticipated novel coming out next spring (can't wait), said:

I have these words taped to my bulletin board: “If you don’t put it in, you can’t take it out.” It’s such a freeing statement: you have to put the words on the page in order to shape them, or change them, or remove them. You have to write your way into the story, knowing that mostly you’re going to fail to get your vision on the page. For a while, at least. 

 

Deborah Siegel, author, coach, and cofounder of SheWrites.com, quoted me words she loves and turns to often from Bonnie Friedman:

Successful writers are not the ones who write the best sentences. They are the ones who keep writing. They are the ones who discover what is most important and strangest and pleasurable in themselves, and keep believing in the value of their work, despite the difficulties.

 

Author and all-around champion of women writers Amy Ferris recalled something her publisher told her:

Dig deep, and then, dig deeper.

 

Phil Cousineau, one of the most prolific writers and authors I know, remembered what Joseph Campbell told him in 1984:

Make it your own.

 

Constance Hale, of Sin and Syntax fame, shared:

Finding the right teacher or editor is often as much a matter of simpatico as it is of your “talent.” Realize that every writing teacher (or editor) is different and has different taste. Don’t be discouraged when one just doesn’t seem to get what you do. When you find someone who clicks in to you, your voice, your mission—stick with that person. He or she will help you do your best work.

 

Grant Faulkner, Executive Director of NaNoWriMo, recalled how a writer once told him to always have something in the mail (or out on submission). Grant said:

It was good advice, because if you always have something in submission, you naturally exist in a state of hopefulness, which, like a lotto ticket, buoys you through the natural down times.

 

My community of She Writes Press authors had a slew of offerings, many of them craft-oriented, but I share here some of the ones that reached my heart:

Writing is a solo act, but publishing requires a full cast. —J.A. Wright, author of How to Grow an Addict
 

Paraphrasing Karen Joy Fowler: If someone gives you feedback, think about it carefully but if you don’t agree, don’t change anything just to please someone else. —Kate Jessica Raphael, author of Murder Under the Bridge
 

Courage, always courage—writing anything is like opening yourself up to criticism, comment—you must have courage to believe in yourself and your right to write. —Karen Elizabeth Lee, author of The Full Catastrophe
 

Learn to tell the difference between reasonable, if critical assessment of your work and the nasty, shaming voice of a destructive inner or outer critic. One is there to help. The other will only discourage. —Betsy Graziani Fasbinder, author of Fire & Water and Filling Her Shoes
 

From Richard Bach, who said, “A professional writer is an amateur who didn’t quit.” —Patti Clark, author of This Way Up

 

When I reached out to Mark Nepo, whose advice is always clear-eyed and delivered so cleanly in every offering he makes, he told a story which can be found in his book, As Far As the Heart Can See:

The best advice I ever received came from the Jungian analyst Helen Luke. I knew Helen during the last two years of her life, and during what turned out to be our last conversation, she said to me, “Yours is to live it, not to reveal it.” This troubled me, for I have spent my life becoming a writer, thinking that my job has been just that—to reveal what is essential and hidden.

In the time since Helen died, I’ve come to understand her last instruction as an invitation to shed any grand purpose, no matter how devoted we may be to what we are doing. She wasn’t telling me to stop writing, but to stop striving to be important. She was inviting me to stop recording the poetry of life and to enter the poetry of life. I’ve learned that this applies to us all.

 

This remembrance of course exemplifies how others’ advice gets integrated, becoming part of us when it truly resonates. We digest it and metabolize it and make it our own. Mark may never have expressed to me his sentiment that he was glad he was writing when no one was listening if Helen’s words hadn’t so touched his heart, had he not listened to what she said and taken her words to heart, entering into the poetry of life for the love of poetry, and not only to become the famous poet he would (unbeknownst to him at the time) later become.

What’s the best advice you’ve received? Share it here and let’s add to this beautiful tapestry.

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Comments
  • Brooke Warner Outlining

    Love this, Dhana—and your new head shot! :)

  • Dhana Musil

    Timely. I have my Mark Nepo "Book of Awakening" beside my computer, because I read his words before I start in on my writing. "Stop recording the poetry of life and enter the poetry of life"-Brilliant. Will write this down. Another passage I have taped up is by Steve Almond (love his writing.)Sometimes I feel my work is too disturbing, but then I re-read his words:

    “You’re a writer. Part of your job is to be disruptive, so don’t be surprised when people are disrupted. People should be agitated. We’re in the business of unbearable feelings.” Steve Almond

  • Celine Keating

    Terrific piece, so many valuable insights. And your first one - to ask yourself if you would keep writing even if you're never noticed, is perhaps the most important. 

  • suzi banks baum

    “Write until the truth emerges.” -Rebecca McClanahan in her “Write Your Heart Out.” There are so many true things to say about what happens when you return to the page, day after day, as you have collected here Brooke. And what really urges me, is, as Amy shared, to “dig, and then dig deeper.” xoS

  • Brooke Warner Outlining

    Thanks for your all your good comments and additions here!

  • Karen Szklany Gault Blogging

    Beautiful post, Brooke.  So much to think about.   A friend of mind shared some wisdom she learned from a writer's retreat she attended recently.  She suggested that I write short stories about my novel characters as a way of getting to know them.  I agree.  It's a slower way of writing a novel, but would most likely to make me a better writer.  I bet it would be a fun practice, just because I love to write.

    There is so much that writing can reveal to us about who we are, and in many ways that is part of the fascination of writing for me...the digging deeper, then deeper.  I get that partly from writing down my dreams when I remember them.  The more I write them down, the more dreams I remember.  I do something related to my writing every day, but I know that I need to do more.

  • Jill Smolowe

    Terrific piece, Brooke.

  • Eva Lesko Natiello

    Love this, Brooke! Thanks for posting it and reminding us. I always say, "The best writing happens with your eyes closed."

  • Patricia Robertson

    Keep writing even when no-one is listening - like that!

  • Marie Therese Batt

    This is wonderful advice. It seems like a strong theme running through many of them is one of perseverance and courage. As a new writer, this is perfect for me to hear.

  • Elizabeth Stokkebye

    I am recognizing what I've heard before and what to me is important:

    Do something related to your writing every day-

    Dig deep, and then, dig deeper-

    Make it your own-

    Thank you for keep pounding...the good advice!

  • Ann Anderson Evans

    A friend told me about the professor who had most influenced her in her writing life.  "He said, 'Don't tell me you're a writer until you've got a check in your hand.'"

    My best advice to myself was to ignore her. I wonder if Emily Dickinson ever held a dollar from her writing in her hand (I don't think they had checks in those days). The world is full of wonderful writers who influence and chronicle other peoples' lives through their writing but never earn a cent.