Hi All,

Sorry I haven't been around for a while. Life took over! You know how that goes.

I have a WIP, about 88,000 words, second draft finished and edited and I need critiques badly. I feel something is missing and can't figure out what it is.

I know it's a lot to ask but if anyone is willing to help, please, please, let me know. I will be happy to return the favor.

Since it's a full ms I don't know if I can blog post it for easier reference. Has anyone had experiences with that?

Just saw I can attach a file. Will do if it's not too large.

Thanks in advance.

PS  I did attach it. Let me know whether it opens or not.