Hello, I wanted to post this to let others know I am available for critiquing. I think I would be the most helpful for fantasy, supernatural and/or paranormal stories. Id like to include historical in that as well, but I may be weaker on some periods of history than others. If the story includes a romance or mystery in it, I may be useful, but as pure genres themselves, I am not as familiar with their particular formats. I am also very good with grammar and spelling. I am willing to help out with novels, but I think I will have to restrict it to one at a time, because my attention span is not as strong as some other people. Id like to help out mostly with any short stories and novellas.

I also am looking for someone to critique/give an object pair of eyes for a short story I am working on. It is a paranormal story involving a character from the 1940s who uses the lingo of the time period but turns out to be something entirely unexpected. I do have plans to proceed to a novel using the characters in this story, but would like to see if I can craft something for a short story publication first. Its not quite ready for a full beta treatment, so I am looking for someone who can give me their impression of it and perhaps offer constructive criticism to achieve a short story.

My best regards to everyone

Sharon

pen name: Mary Thornell