Is my log line effective?
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I have just completed my first screenplay and would like some input on the log line.  Critiques would be helpful.  Thanks in advance. 

"Inner and outer conflicts prompt a woman to shed her past and seek redemption for her betrayals."



  • here's an formula some one sent me to go by as for as loglines WHEN THIS HAPPENS, THIS PERSON MUST (VERB THIS) BEFORE OR ELSE THIS CONSEQUENCE OCCURS