powerful....

Nice!! I love the tone you create, not just with the setting and Jesse and Clara's attitudes, but with the constant theme of a knife. It's really interesting. I was very swept up by the situation they were in, and could definetly relate. My favorite...

Interesting complex between compassion and lack therof. I especially like the last line as a question: it really helps the reader, I feel. At least for me, I see it as a struggle between a two people, perhaps the relationship between two people, and...