After much backing and forthing (as I pantsed this story and I'm usually a plotter), I have finally uploaded it. On to the next story. Kaleidoscope: A Murderous Reunion https://valeriebonham.com/2019/05/01/kaleidoscope-a-murderous-reunion/

The perils of using more than one word-processing program: having to convert quotation marks around edited words so that they're all either straight or curly. My critique program makes it easy to find them, but the changes have to be done...

Two spaces after a period, just as Miss Knight imprinted us with in typing class. It's science! My high school newspaper editor niece's explosion in 3, 2, .... "The effect of spacing following periods and commas during reading" --...

Found in my notes: The Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows which can be repurposed as "inner conflict for main characters." http://www.dictionaryofobscuresorrows.com/