...a few things from the original and this rewrite. Something like this is what it came out to:
Roan has kept his demon subdued with his psychic abilities for years, but there's someth...
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Ever since he turned sixteen, Roan has kept his demon subdued with his psychic abilities. But there's something very special about Sheeku's physical touch. Not only i...
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...st be temporary and platonic. Those are his strict conditions. Ever since he turned sixteen, Roan has kept his demon subdued with his psychic abilities. Now, he has a serious probl...
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...course the marriage must be temporary and platonic. Those are his strict conditions. Roan has always kept his demon subdued with his psychic abilities, but he runs into a serious p...
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...tion, "we" should have a synopsis written that we worked hard on, as it is going to be the agents first real view of our writing style, plotting abilities, etc. and for the rare agent...
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...ggles with the perfection of Amanda and the imperfections of Chloe. Her often-overwhelming attraction to Chris is as perplexing as the new super abilities she possesses. However, she m...
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...week and I compete in amateur races and sometimes I even place in them. I take running seriously, and I am always looking at ways to improve my abilities as a runner.
Same thing with...
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...h games, conversations, and reading aloud you can enrich and strengthen your kids memory, attention, language, critical thinking, and sequencing abilities (to name just a few). My blog...
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...de and told "You're so young you don't need a cane.Wha's wrong with you?" (I'm 32) I have to admit though, I'm mortified by my failing cognitive abilities, I find that people aren't as...
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did you notice that the domain name is for sale? Not sure if that is telling or not, but it would make me a tad nervous.
I also feel that your line about it being above your "tech" abilities might be saying something to you.
good luck. elizabeth
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