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  • ...a young women’s social network called She-Writes.com. [sic] Why would an old man join a WOMEN’S social network? At this point it's difficult to ascertain whether this revolting beast...
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  • ...                           I wanted to look up, startled, but happy, to hear this particular person. I decided to peek through my folded arms to ascertain who spoke to me. Anyone else...
  • ...OK, I finished it...the choppiness is really distracting, and you have some weird phrasing. A bit purple-prosey, awkward phrasing ("semblance?" "ascertain?") You don't need to pull out...

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  • ...ou and me" (!) but they fool everybody and in the end...  So from that standpoint, the reader has to work hard just as he might in real life, to ascertain who this person really is.In...
  • ...onfusion on the part of authors. I do think it's an industry problem, and authors get caught in the middle, but the folks who buy books, I still ascertain, always hope that they'll suc...
  • Wickham Boyle commented on her article Machine Mania
    Thanks SCS, I love the idea of resetting an inner barometer. I feel I am in a constant battle with what I call my inner gyroscope, attempting to ascertain if I am upside down or doing fine with all the swirl of moderninity.