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... I wanted to look up, startled, but happy, to hear this particular person. I decided to peek through my folded arms to ascertain who spoke to me. Anyone else...
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...OK, I finished it...the choppiness is really distracting, and you have some weird phrasing. A bit purple-prosey, awkward phrasing ("semblance?" "ascertain?") You don't need to pull out...
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...and and all the members here @ Why Do I Write & What Is My Process a part of your SheWrites family. I hope you gather much encouragement and ascertain useful information about writ...
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