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  • ...with my own cup of water makes a great healthy snack. That they is not going to provide you with nutrition to your physique but provide you with excessive unhealthy calories to burn. I...
  • Maria, Thank you. I would always wonder if I was using too many pronouns, but now I see that using a person's name in every dialogue can be excessive.   Thank you. I sometimes wonder if I am using pronouns too much but you made it very clear. Using a person's name in every dialogue can be excessive.
  • ...strikes a chord most is "READ IT ALOUD." That's the best advice you can give. If it sounds wrong, it probably is wrong. Of course, "#10 Look for excessive detail of mundane actions," i...
  • ...for male literature so I invented one. My ex used to read serial novels with the "hero" killing the bad guys in a hail of bullets or some other excessive testosterone induced violence...
  • ...for male literature so I invented one. My ex used to read serial novels with the "hero" killing the bad guys in a hail of bullets or some other excessive testosterone induced violence...
  • Zetta Brown commented on her article Borders Should Just Go Bust
    ...ry.  I have nothing against indie bookstores, but from what I hear from colleagues, they can be just as bad as the chain stores when it comes to excessive returns and/or not paying. IM...