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  • Lucinda, thank you for this, especially the issue with adjectives and adverbs. I kno...the way to completion and I try to stay focused on the excess. Editing helps to tone down. Thanks for the reminder...
  • Thanks, Brooke! Always a concern for memoir writers. I had a tip from a lawyer who s...e my memoir, I try to keep in mind why I'm writing the story and as Sonya says, tone does matter. If anyone is wri...
  • What a great article, Brooke. Thank you. Your clarity that "You don't hear a lot abo...t rare" really helps me feel on solid ground.  Sonja Larsen, to your point that tone matters, thank you. I hadn't...
  • Good advice! When I wrote my memoir Red Star Tattoo about growing up in a cult I wor...about, several ex-members named in the book have written to me and thanked me. Tone matters quite a bit in how pe...
  • Hi Kate, Yes, it does take a lot of courage to put your work out to people who don't...smart-alecky and in the very first few sentences, the reader isn't sure if the tone is meant to be funny or serio...
  • I appreciate the point about white authors not saying "what about me" when authors of c...outlook in fiction, e.g., have you noticed how brown skin is compared to all sorts of food items by white authors, but white skin...
  • Excellent post. I heartily agree. When I began writing, I was told to brutally cut nearly all descriptive passages...d advice. I write books I would want to read. I want do more than step into the skin...
  • Elizabeth, I commend you for trying a new writing style!  And travel writing is such fun.  There are several types...u smell roasting coffee as you sprinted past cafe-loungers?  Bring us into your skin...
  • @Sakki The Lynch files and Crow letters were the basis of how to make African slaves perfect in their servitud...the difference between a House and Field slave (and the start of the light skinned vs dark skin...
  • Thanks, Annie.  Very thought-provoking article. I swear.  Too much.  And sometimes.....that... I confess my memoir is 'peppered' with profanity.  Now I know I could 'tone it down' but I won't.  I won'...