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  • What inspires you to stop dreaming it and start living it?  The reality of mortality. Early last year, a madman took the life of my brother in law, who was at that tim...
  • Okay - here's the new first chapter. Please comment. Any places that trip you up or slow you down? In my old Brady-house living room, I sat at the edge of our mohair b...
  • I like how you played with it. It stresses a voice I don't have. :) Which is yours and is lively and great.  I guess I'll give you the first chapter here.  (It begins...
  • Welcome to The Great Recession, when companies are laying people off left and right, and even Big Law isn't hiring anymore. At least there's no place at Robertson, Lev...
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  • I took a shot at reorganizing this so it followed and heightened what I think is the most universal aspect of your opening. Tell me what you think? I also shortened u...
  • 2037 words today.  I don't know if this helps, but I'm having success (if that can be measured in 2 days) with skipping to scenes that I have clarity on.  Now this pre...
  •  Maybe this is too convoluted now? Member and Statistical Records Department Salt Lake City, UT   May, 8 2003 Dear Sister Kinsey,   This letter is to notify you that,...