First two lines are a great hook.
My attention wandered immediately thereafter.
Therefore, can you break it up? For instance:
The woman read the paragraph again....
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I didn't actually enjoy the Anne Lamott piece either, though I respected the writing ... if that makes sense. I felt almost like she was fighting so hard against suga...
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I love it. I think it's a strong query where the house is the main character and all the characters in it both support the house's goal by supporting their own goals....
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The Space Between Us (Brainiacs in Love) by Melanie Summers
“This book left me with a big stupid grin on my face and a really uplifted mood!”
“If The Hating Game...
Deconstructing Dark Romance, (Exploring the darker side of human nature in fiction)
What is dark romance? That was a question I was asked recently.
For me as a...
Writing my debut novel, I tried something new every time I found myself stuck long the process. My favorite tool was a color coded spread sheet that served as an outli...
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I relate to both your need to be liked and create peace and the desire to be real and authentic. I am still struggling with how (and why) to write my memoir. One majo...
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Emily
like you I grew up poor in a rich part of town. In a big family like the Waltons. I, too, craved all the things I couldn't have and saw all the children having a...
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