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  • Hi Lea, I think this sounds like such an interesting story! I love the mix of mythology and modernity. I would totally read th...
  • Started by Lea Crowills
    Last reply by Sarah Pinneo
    Hi everyone, I took in the suggestions from my last discussion and hopefully I did a better job on this one than the first. Please feel free to tear this one a part to...
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  • Started by Lea Crowills
    Last reply by Candy Fite
    So here's my query that I'm using currently. I would love brutal honesty and critiques on it...   Thanks Bunches!!     AgentRandom Literary Management Dear Ms./Mr. Lit...
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  • Hi Brooke,  I'm sharing the prologue.   Thanks!  Judy PROLOGUE:  (Kensington, California, 2009)           It started with the cookbooks.  In January of 2009, having be...
  • I absolutely love your story.  I like the cross between the modern world and mythology. The paragraph that describes your story is nice. The line "Elle must place her trust in the very relatives wh...
  • Hi Ashley,   I think you might have too much back story in the first paragraph. What exactly is your hook? You talk about the deaths and loss Elle has experienced but...