So here's my query that I'm using currently. I would love brutal honesty and critiques on it...
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Hi Brooke, I'm sharing the prologue. Thanks! Judy
PROLOGUE: (Kensington, California, 2009)
It started with the cookbooks. In January of 2009, having be...
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I absolutely love your story. I like the cross between the modern world and mythology.
The paragraph that describes your story is nice. The line "Elle must place her trust in the very relatives wh...
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Hi Ashley,
I think you might have too much back story in the first paragraph. What exactly is your hook? You talk about the deaths and loss Elle has experienced but...
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Hi everyone, I took in the suggestions from my last discussion and hopefully I did a better job on this one than the first. Please feel free to tear this one a part to...
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