Hello Everyone Here is a sneak peak of my first draft of my novel Crime and Passion
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Hello Everyone ,
I am putting a copy of my first chapter of my first draft to my novel am trying to write called Crime and Passion. This is my very first time writing or trying to write a novel. Anyone that can good me advice on how it is I would really like the help since it is my first novel am trying..
Thank You and have a wonderful Day!!!Crime%20and%20Passion.docx
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Thank you for the advice and I will read it agian and fix what needs to be fixed.
Took a look at the rest. It's hard to tell who is talking. The major issue is as I said below: No paragraphs when someone new is speaking, no paragraphs at all, no quotation marks and you jump from character to character. I would clean all that up then post it again. Hope that helps!
Just took a quick glance, but it needs some punctuation and paragraph separation. I'll try and look more later!!